The Long-drawn-out Wait…
O Lord!
In your world, In my world, In our world
Why are hatred and war in attendance?
Your heart is so expansive
Yet why are ours so constricted?
At every step, why is there a boundary?
All this earth that is yours
Sun is what it revolves around
Why is it so shady still?
On this world’s veil,
why do I see blood’s colour everyday?
Echoing are the shouts of many
That pour like hot iron in my ears
Who wants to listen to the talks of love?
Shattering are all the dreams
Who is going to gather all these scattered pieces?
Heart's doors are locked
Why are these locks so rusty?
My answer?
I am still waiting……
10 comments:
very unlike you kinda post
WOW!
Simply WOW! Im enormously impressed.
I loved it when u say
"In your world, In my world, In our world
Why are hatred and war in attendance?" Talkin bout different worlds eh!
and also the last para!!
good job
-I
very unlike you kinda post
@ island girl
well, i m very much myself here...but have written on something that i havent written about earlier...guess its just the intensity of the topic
@ impressionist
thanks..well personally these are just some mingled thoughts and questions in writing..and different world yet all this there in all of them...thanks again for liking it
@aarish
well, i m very much myself here...but have written on something that i havent written about earlier...guess its just the intensity of the topic
o its seems as if its not u who is written this..interesting
lemme check the date-march 28 hmmm
Your heart is so expansive
Yet why are ours so constricted?
interestingly, i am finding u much more non-constricted lately and enjoying. is it simply the effect of walking down to the bus stop together or has something changed?
either way-cheers to you!
mehak
o simply put very unlike you kinda post!
well write your own comments ppl..stop chepoing mine :P
hehehe
attitude! abey islandgirl tujhe tere he paani mei duboo dungi hehe
@mehak
well, i m very much myself here...but have written on something that i havent written about earlier...guess its just the intensity of the topic
@Island girl
well i dont know wher ethe creativity is vanishing...and ya the answer is the same for all of them
@mehak
stop fighting now u two!!!
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